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It was thursday and you had been snowed in from school. You’d be happy on any other day, except today was Valentine's day.

It’s not like you had anyone to be with, you were single and lonely, but you’d have still liked to be around your friends who were also single. But no, Jack Frost had decided to shower all the kids in town with a ‘wonderful’ snow day.

Yeah, you knew Jack Frost, your young friend Jamie had made you believe. He’s so cute and adorable, his sister as well, if you were lucky sometimes, you’d babysit them. The only bad thing about that is that Jack Frost would be around almost always.

You didn’t get along well with Jack Frost, so him being the reason behind this unhappy day just made you loath him more. You never liked the tricks he would pull on you. Throwing snowballs at you, making you slip, dumping snow on you from tree branches. You would always yell at him and storm off. He wouldn’t be affected in the least, just laugh.

Your thought were interrupted when you heard knocking on your door. You got up from the couch and walked over to it. Upon opening it, you found Jamie and Sophie.

“Happy Valentines day! Come on [Name], it’s a snow day! Come play with us!” Jamie said, smiling up at you.

“Play play! Snow snow!” Sophie said, jumping up and down excitedly. You laughed at their actions and thought for a second. You didn’t really have anything better to do, so you agreed. You grabbed your jacket and boots, put them on and joined the children in their snow day fun.

“Jack!” Jamie and his friends yelled. You deflated. Great, he was here. You should have expected this, he was the one to give you a snow day.

“Hey there everyone! You ready for some fun?” he asked as he landed, the children surrounding him. You rolled your eyes. He laughed with the children and ruffled Jamies hair. Your heart skipped a beat.

You’ve never noticed how attractive he was when he was smiling. Wait, what?!? You shook your head, banishing the thoughts you just had. Your brain was just thinking this because it was valentines day.

“Happy Valentines day [Name].” you were shocked when you heard Jacks voice so close. In your thoughts, he had wandered over to you. And now he was uncomfortably close. You blushed, then looked away.

“Psh, not so happy. I had made all these treats for my friends to give to them, and here you come, ruining the day.” you said, blushing still. You’ve never blushed this much at him before!

“Well, you’ll just have to give them all to us!” Jack said. You just rolled your eyes and walked away. You knew that your treats would go bad by tomorrow and so, you retrieved them and handed them out.

“Yummy!” was the main response. You chuckled at the as all the kids blushed when they ate your treats and before you knew it, they were all gone.

“That was delicious.” a deep, sexy voice said from behind you into your ear. You shrieked and jumped away from the voice. Behind you, smirking at you, was Jack Frost. You had reluctantly given him a treat or two earlier.

“Geez, what the hell was that for?” you angrily whispered at him, making sure that none of the children had heard you. He just chuckled and started to walk by you.

“You know, you’re pretty cute when you blush.” he whispered to you before starting a snowball fight with the kids. You blushed more and felt a little shaky in the legs. Why was he acting like this?

You shook your head again and walked away. You went to your house and grabbed some ice skates and headed out to the frozen pond nearby. You felt free when you skated and could think a little more clearly.

You thought about Jacks actions today. He had complimented you, TWICE! He also hadn’t pulled any pranks today. It was almost like he was  . . . flirting with you. You blushed at the thought. Why would he be flirting with you? It’s not like he liked you or anything, right?

You continued skating, now paying attention to the surroundings of the little pond. You also started doing some fancy skating moves. Twirling and jumping. After one twirl, you closed your eyes to feel it more than see it. You landed perfectly and when you opened your eyes, you were met by icy blue ones.

“Gah!” you shouted in surprise and fell backwards. You braced yourself for hitting the hard ice, but it never came. Instead, you felt strong, cold arms wrap around your waist and hoist you up. You opened your eyes again, and again, you were met with the same icy blues ones. You didn’t shout this time though.

“Are you okay?” Jack asked you, his face close to yours. You couldn’t speak, so you just nodded. He smiled and brought your head to his shoulder, hugging you. “Good! Don’t scare me like that.” he said in a happy tone, but you could hear a tone of worry as well.

“It was your fault! You scared me first!” you said annoyed, but you couldn’t bring yourself to pull away. In fact, you wrapped your arms loosely around him. He chuckled and held you tighter.

“Heh, sorry about that.” he said and pulled away, but kept his hands on your shoulders. It was silent for a moment, then Jack chuckled to himself. You gave him a confused look.

“I think I’m a snow flake.” he said, still chuckling. You looked at him strangely.

“Why?” you asked. He leaned in closer to you.

“Because I think I’m falling for you.” he said and laid his lips on yours.
haha!!! this was a little belated valentines day writing, but i hope its still effective!

this is for :icon10usernamehere10: hope you like it!!!!
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:iconassainwolf9:
assainwolf9 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Student General Artist
-nosebleed -amazjng
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:iconhichigo1-0:
hichigo1-0 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  New Deviant
That was so amazing
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
1) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

2) THAT IS THE ABSOLUTE SMOOTHEST LINE I HAVE EVER HEARD. YAS!!!
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
ONLY COMING FROM JACK, THOUGH...

Anyone else said that and I'd probably punch them...
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hichigo1-0 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  New Deviant
I agree. if anyone pulled that on me, besides Jack. Their nose would be broken, lip swollen, ribs cracked. They would never look and feel the same way AGAIN!
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xRomeoBluex Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well played Frost, well played.
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:iconblackbird1101:
BlackBird1101 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
Awww..... I just love silly love confessions! Blush 
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:icontheflightlessangel13:
TheFlightlessAngel13 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that was so sweet and so cheesy

 I LOVE IT!!!
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Spiria7634 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
Dying of happiness here........
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:iconneverforgetthemisfit:
Awwwwwwssdd ghnjkhgf
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:iconshelbymitch:
ShelbyMitch Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
Only Jack Frost can say that pick-up line without it being cheesy. It was a sweet story :)
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:iconzombiedswim:
ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
IT WAS PERFECT COMING FROM HIM, THOUGH.

I'M GOING TO GO CRY NOW.

BYE.

Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Senpai notice me) [V3] 
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ShelbyMitch Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
IKR He was so...himself

I gotta stop fantasizing over that scenario Nosebleed - Purple Guy. 
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
So do I...
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k4568 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
That was the lamest, but most adorable, pickup line ever. The story was precious, too.
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slendermangurl Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Student General Artist
O////O OMG BLUSHES SO HARD slendy sees. me goes lol .(btw we are at the table) #sits next to slender#Albert smashed lips into mine everyone WTF
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AstroKitty1 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
XD my birth day is on valentines day!
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SammieFrost Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh god...blush 
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JellicleGirl Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Cheesy!!! But adorable!
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:iconkirito109:
Kirito109 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014   Artist
I LUVED IT!!!!
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:iconsneakyxwoman13:
SneakyXWoman13 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
His voice is only sexy because it's Chris Pine. ;)
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:iconlayla-mindora:
layla-mindora Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: Serious jack...*facepalms*
Jack: what!? I found it a good one.
Me: *shakes head*
Jack: are you sure? *smirks*
Me: *blushes*YES
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SilverTheMystica Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Smooth jack very smooth...
Jack: I know I am...
Me: shut up frost...*blushes heavily*
Jack:dawwwww your blushing!!!:3
Me: *summons fire like a badass*
Jack: *runs away*
Me:* sexy evil smirk* YOU CAN RUN BUT YOU CAN'T HIDE!!
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Luna-Mini-Milka Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Frosty's special pick up line~ xD
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phantomdeathwifey12 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I aDUMBLEdore your story! Gryffindorable man! Wish that really happened.
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SilverTheMystica Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SIRIUS-ly??
Enough with the potterpuns they are MUNDUNGUS-ly outrageous!!
:3
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Faustita Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
oh my.....that pick up line <3 cute :3 Love +favlove I love deviantART! Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] 
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erinkirland-mulby Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
PERFECT
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HetaliaRules99 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that pick up line though XD
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:iconmelbunnie24:
Melbunnie24 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the silly pick up line XD
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:iconhoney537:
Honey537 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist
xD Jack Frost pick up line!
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Neryss-Veletz Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Smooth Jack is smooth.
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KemonoApocalypse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
/gigglesnorts at the ending


Perfection.
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megthedoodler1999 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tht pickup line though ^^ so cute 
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whiterockshooter15 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
Dat Pickup Line.
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the-awesomest-one Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
best. pick up line. ever.  
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echoknows Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Amen!
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:iconthe-awesomest-one:
the-awesomest-one Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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shannonredwind8 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
-blushes- perfect thing to read
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HTTYD-MC-PL-Twilight Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aaaaaaww!!!!! :lovely:
Let me just fangirl over this... la in love 
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AzureFlame805 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So.Fucking.ADORABLE!!!!!!!!
.////////////.
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truehero10 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Nice, well, for me, I think I already got frostbite (the time I went to China, and it was already snowing)~ My face hurts and the skin started to come off when I am going back home~ Doctor said it's allergy, but my cousin and friend said it's frostbite~ Thinking back, it's very awkward~ *blush*
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SpiritStien111 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
sorry but that's kinda funny

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truehero10 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Maybe
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xXJetBlackOwlXx Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Writer
Are you going to continue it? Or no because it's a request?
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SpiritStien111 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
One shot. Sorry
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Thedimensiontravel Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the pick up line. And i love this story.
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SpiritStien111 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
thanks
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Yuki-sama12 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Very smooth
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diamondangel156 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
smooth
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