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It was thursday and you had been snowed in from school. You’d be happy on any other day, except today was Valentine's day.

It’s not like you had anyone to be with, you were single and lonely, but you’d have still liked to be around your friends who were also single. But no, Jack Frost had decided to shower all the kids in town with a ‘wonderful’ snow day.

Yeah, you knew Jack Frost, your young friend Jamie had made you believe. He’s so cute and adorable, his sister as well, if you were lucky sometimes, you’d babysit them. The only bad thing about that is that Jack Frost would be around almost always.

You didn’t get along well with Jack Frost, so him being the reason behind this unhappy day just made you loath him more. You never liked the tricks he would pull on you. Throwing snowballs at you, making you slip, dumping snow on you from tree branches. You would always yell at him and storm off. He wouldn’t be affected in the least, just laugh.

Your thought were interrupted when you heard knocking on your door. You got up from the couch and walked over to it. Upon opening it, you found Jamie and Sophie.

“Happy Valentines day! Come on [Name], it’s a snow day! Come play with us!” Jamie said, smiling up at you.

“Play play! Snow snow!” Sophie said, jumping up and down excitedly. You laughed at their actions and thought for a second. You didn’t really have anything better to do, so you agreed. You grabbed your jacket and boots, put them on and joined the children in their snow day fun.

“Jack!” Jamie and his friends yelled. You deflated. Great, he was here. You should have expected this, he was the one to give you a snow day.

“Hey there everyone! You ready for some fun?” he asked as he landed, the children surrounding him. You rolled your eyes. He laughed with the children and ruffled Jamies hair. Your heart skipped a beat.

You’ve never noticed how attractive he was when he was smiling. Wait, what?!? You shook your head, banishing the thoughts you just had. Your brain was just thinking this because it was valentines day.

“Happy Valentines day [Name].” you were shocked when you heard Jacks voice so close. In your thoughts, he had wandered over to you. And now he was uncomfortably close. You blushed, then looked away.

“Psh, not so happy. I had made all these treats for my friends to give to them, and here you come, ruining the day.” you said, blushing still. You’ve never blushed this much at him before!

“Well, you’ll just have to give them all to us!” Jack said. You just rolled your eyes and walked away. You knew that your treats would go bad by tomorrow and so, you retrieved them and handed them out.

“Yummy!” was the main response. You chuckled at the as all the kids blushed when they ate your treats and before you knew it, they were all gone.

“That was delicious.” a deep, sexy voice said from behind you into your ear. You shrieked and jumped away from the voice. Behind you, smirking at you, was Jack Frost. You had reluctantly given him a treat or two earlier.

“Geez, what the hell was that for?” you angrily whispered at him, making sure that none of the children had heard you. He just chuckled and started to walk by you.

“You know, you’re pretty cute when you blush.” he whispered to you before starting a snowball fight with the kids. You blushed more and felt a little shaky in the legs. Why was he acting like this?

You shook your head again and walked away. You went to your house and grabbed some ice skates and headed out to the frozen pond nearby. You felt free when you skated and could think a little more clearly.

You thought about Jacks actions today. He had complimented you, TWICE! He also hadn’t pulled any pranks today. It was almost like he was  . . . flirting with you. You blushed at the thought. Why would he be flirting with you? It’s not like he liked you or anything, right?

You continued skating, now paying attention to the surroundings of the little pond. You also started doing some fancy skating moves. Twirling and jumping. After one twirl, you closed your eyes to feel it more than see it. You landed perfectly and when you opened your eyes, you were met by icy blue ones.

“Gah!” you shouted in surprise and fell backwards. You braced yourself for hitting the hard ice, but it never came. Instead, you felt strong, cold arms wrap around your waist and hoist you up. You opened your eyes again, and again, you were met with the same icy blues ones. You didn’t shout this time though.

“Are you okay?” Jack asked you, his face close to yours. You couldn’t speak, so you just nodded. He smiled and brought your head to his shoulder, hugging you. “Good! Don’t scare me like that.” he said in a happy tone, but you could hear a tone of worry as well.

“It was your fault! You scared me first!” you said annoyed, but you couldn’t bring yourself to pull away. In fact, you wrapped your arms loosely around him. He chuckled and held you tighter.

“Heh, sorry about that.” he said and pulled away, but kept his hands on your shoulders. It was silent for a moment, then Jack chuckled to himself. You gave him a confused look.

“I think I’m a snow flake.” he said, still chuckling. You looked at him strangely.

“Why?” you asked. He leaned in closer to you.

“Because I think I’m falling for you.” he said and laid his lips on yours.
haha!!! this was a little belated valentines day writing, but i hope its still effective!

this is for :icon10usernamehere10: hope you like it!!!!
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:iconfaustita:
oh my.....that pick up line <3 cute :3 Love +favlove I love deviantART! Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] 
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erinkirland-mulby Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
PERFECT
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HetaliaRules99 Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that pick up line though XD
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:iconmelbunnie24:
the silly pick up line XD
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:iconhoney537:
xD Jack Frost pick up line!
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:iconneryss-veletz:
Smooth Jack is smooth.
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KemonoApocalypse Feb 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
/gigglesnorts at the ending


Perfection.
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mockingjaysinger Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
tht pickup line though ^^ so cute 
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the-awesomest-one Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
best. pick up line. ever.  
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